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[青葱校园] 【那些年,那些属于我的校园女神】第十一章:台球室斗智斗勇,冰山校花初动心

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这章确实不赖,既吃到了肉,也让依彤的调教更进一步。
打台球的节奏基本照着原来的来的,但是可以增加更多诗雅被凌辱、吃豆腐的戏份,这样把诗雅的情欲点燃起来,后面小杰吃起来更加合理,最后颖儿翻身的情节可以更往前,因为这样诗雅害怕的心理会导致她被草地更服帖,相对应地,小杰应该软了才对,毕竟那么怕颖儿,哈哈哈。
依彤的调教也很合理,循序渐进,下一步可以考虑在众人面前,依彤给小杰口的戏份,或者素股,不需要最后一步,慢慢沦落就好。
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